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~Verse 1~

Nobody knows who I really am
and I've never felt so empty inside.
Nobody knows, they don't give a damn
that the biggest part of me has died.

I've lost the ability, the one to feel.
I've lost my heart to an old memory,
one that isn't even real...
...it is just a mystery.


~Chorus~

So here I stay on this journey
to a non-existent place.
A haven where I will never worry
if someone recognizes my face,
a haven where the dark creatures are angels,
and where I'll never need their grace.
This choice is my own, you will just have to see
that I must handle it alone. You can never come with me.


~Verse 2~

Nobody cares what I have become.
They prefer to talk so quietly.
Nobody knows about the outcome,
so they remain thinking silently.

I've lost the reason to reconcile
so you people just beware,
when you think that you're in exile
I am the one who is really there.


~Chorus~
Repeat 2x

So here I stay on this journey
to a non-existent place.
A haven where I will never worry
if someone recognizes my face,
a haven where the dark creatures are angels,
and where I'll never need their grace.
This choice is my own, you will just have to see
that I must handle it alone. You can never come with me.


~Verse 3~

Nobody cares that there's no hope for me.
Nobody knows because they can't tell
that I'm forever in a purgatory.
I can't even go to hell.

I'm trapped in my own disease
so just keep away.
It's infectious, so I can't stand at ease,
instead just forever I'll live a day.


~Break~

A day will last, one day will be
a repeat for all of eternity.
For in my eyes, you can only see black.
Living my way, you can never - look - back.


~Chorus~
Fade Out

So here I stay on this journey
to a non-existent place.
A haven where I will never worry
if someone recognizes my face,
a haven where the dark creatures are angels,
and where I'll never need their grace.
This choice is my own, you will just have to see
that I must handle it alone. You can never come with me.

You must never follow me.

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I would prefer not to describe the meaning of this one. All I can say is that if I went through the trouble of actually writing a song, then it's a serious thought I've been having. Though I must warn you that trying to read me won't help you figure me out. Your interpretation of this song will likely be a fallacy.

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~glassreflections May 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful lyrics. I love how they fit and flow together... I would like to know the melody though... is this to a particular song? Or did you create a melody to this?
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:iconan-unsure-thing:
It has it's own melody. :)
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:iconglassreflections:
~glassreflections May 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, I love the way it flows. It goes together eloquently, but simply. :)
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^3wyl May 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:w00t:

The lyrics are amazing. :D I really like the rhyme and the concept. The flow is great.
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!Calibre-Not-Output May 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Define "phallacy" - my interpretation may not be what you meant, but that doesn't mean it's worthless. In fact, I prefer texts that offer several interpretive possibilities.

That said, I like this - though I like it as a poem since I don't know how you gave it rhythm and speed as a song. Sing it and upload a demo, why don't you? :dance:
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:iconan-unsure-thing:
I was planning to actually. Though, my voice... well, let's just say it might shatter some poor eardrums.
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!Calibre-Not-Output May 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Nonsense, you're just self-conscious. Heck, if even I can sing in a band and still be allowed to play in public...
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:iconan-unsure-thing:
I'm afraid people would think I was throwing up rather than signing. Like that constant gagging noise... :XD:
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