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I held my head under cold water and it felt so good.
You panicked, as I suspected you would.
I tied the bricks to my feet and went down. Down.
Into the lake, where I did drown. Drown.

Three weeks later when they located me,
my skin was bloated, white and puffy.
Now here I come back to haunt you as you sleep
with rhythmic patterns and memories to make you weep.

I am your nightmare, your every dream.
I am always there, always in the seams
of your simple life in that small town on the coast
reappearing in the dark as your ghost.

You told me to disappear, to leave, go away...
so I did just that. Now you wish I had stayed.
If you had thought carefully, spoke better terms,
I wouldn't be six feet under, covered in worms.

It is your loss, not mine. I am still stalking your brain.
One day when you've had enough, when it makes you insane...
...you will go deep. You will go so far down. Down.
Just like I did, you will drown. Drown.
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Something meant to make you ponder. Choose your words carefully, as you never know what the results may entail.

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:iconrao-uber:
wow... this is a little weird. i had a situation 2 days ago where i wish somebody had done this.

nice rhythm though.

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he will laugh, the messenger of god, son of david.
the worlds ending is mine to enjoy, the true beginning is mine to like, the one death protects... is mine to love.
so what if i cry, i know i'm not as good as you, no i'm better.
-isaac malachai davidson
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Wow ^^
Wonderful, love it.
Kinda remind me of the one im writing right now ^^

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wow.......scary, sympathy...longing.....misdrected...
well written...:heart:


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:iconvito-toni-costello:
like the repetition of the down-drown bit, gives it a real sense of start and end

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~ John Steinbeck

"In my opinion, nothing is worthwhile; everything is futile."
Ecclesiastes 1;2
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Thank you :)

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Thank you very much.

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I'm glad you like it. :D

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:iconvito-toni-costello:
anytime

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~ John Steinbeck

"In my opinion, nothing is worthwhile; everything is futile."
Ecclesiastes 1;2

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